This poem is in the form of a naani poem. Naani means: expressing one and all in theTelugu language. This form originated in India from the Telugu poet, Dr. N. Gopi. A naani has four lines with a total of 20-25 syllables and no title. It was written for Rebecca over at Fake Flamenco as part of her June Poetry Challenge :
Grey dawn is a stranger
Yet I remember
Gulls on a clay flat beach
Frost sparkling a forbidden lawn
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Splendid painting, too
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Thanks Derrick – one of my early paintings from 2016!
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I love this Kim. And also your beautiful painting!
Will try to check in here more often… I have indeed missed your poetry. ❤️
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I miss yours!
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