The phone call home
from a mountain somewhere
as rally cars roar past
and the crowd yells
shouting above the noise
laughing with freedom and joy
you thought to call Mum while
having the time of your life
Copyright © 2021 Kim Whysall-Hammond
For DVerse.
The Cheesesellers Wife 
LOVE it! and so would any mum to be thought of and given a call!
Fun use of the line.
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Thanks Lillian. Although I cheated a bit and used 2 lines……but I couldn’t resist the title!
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Awwww…. That’s sweet, Kim! <3
-David
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My youngest boy is both fiercely independent (Mum must never do anything for him it seems, even back when he was a toddler) and yet very thoughtful and affectionate.
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brilliant Kim! <3
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Thank you Carol
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As a parent…I know just what you mean.. so nicely done…
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Thanks — it’s great when they do this, isn’t it? :)
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Nice one!
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:)
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So cool ! You have done so well !!
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Thank you Glenys!
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I hope my boys will do the same when they are grown :-)
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I’m sure they will!
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Lovely
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Thanks Derrick
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Gorgeously rendered 💝💝
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Thank you!
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I love it… and so sweet…
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Yes, he is….. ;)
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That’s a lovely poem, down to Earth, friendly.
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Thank you David.
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