4 thoughts on “Caterpillar Dawn

  1. fair enough; I understand that; but there are haiku which are three line poems which yours is if you take out the third line — unnecessary — and the whole second stanza which reads as ‘tacked on’ anyway. You’ve written a beautiful haiku. Read some longer poems, get a feel for them. You can write both :)

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