Rust red sun
Burns through yellow grey clouds
So dark at Noon
That street lights flicker
The silence of the birds
Is telling
Copyright © 2017 Kim Whysall-Hammond
Storm Ophelia (once a category 3 hurricane) has today brought dust from the Azores and from Portugal. In the west of England, people can smell burning too………..rather apocalyptic.
well done captuing the scene, the last two line perfect ending… chilling
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Thank you — Its been an ‘interesting’ day.
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i bet
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We had just the same sun here in Yorkshire. How well you captured it in your poem. I must try to refer to it on my blog today as I couldn’t yesterday.
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Wow ! Looks and reads like a solar eclipse !
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Great photo! We saw that red sun last month with the forest fires all around. So eerie!
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Thing is, I don’t remember ever seeing in in England before…..
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Nice poem. Can you tell why the sun is red?!
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Yes, dust in a upper atmosphere due to storm Ophelia
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We had red sun in Latvia too!
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That is for sure a tell-tale sign of changes. (…sigh…..)
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